Monday, February 4, 2008

The facts on de facto

I came across this line while editing today:
"To date, the current de facto standard is...."
This is a belt-and-suspenders approach to writing. "To date" and "current," especially when you're writing in the writing tense (and if you're not, you've got other problems) are redundant here. "Current" is "to date." I'd much prefer "The standard is..."
Now for "de facto" ... this gets interesting. The definition is "in fact, in reality." Using it as a modifier here is like adding a second set of suspenders with your belt. A standard is a fact in this case. Webster's Unabridged provides a fine illustration of how to use de facto:
"Although the school was said to be open to all qualified students, it still practiced de facto segregation."

Onward to online...

From BBC online: "A total of 24 states will hold nominating contests on Super Tuesday." Better: "Twenty-four states xxx" (Geez, from the Brits, the fathers of the mother tongue).

Jennifer Lehr's opening line on the Huffington Post: "I've been totally obsessed with the primaries."
If you've got an obsession, I can guarantee you it's total. Obsession. 1. The domination of one's thoughts or feelings by a persistent idea, image, desire, etc. From the Latin obsessio meaning blockade or siege.

1 comment:

Brian Santo said...

"...totally obsessed..."

You are correct. "Totally" in this phrase is unnecessary. In a newspaper piece, that phrase is merely sloppy.

...But in a blog? "Totally" is still redundant, but adding it conveys a giddy, simple enthusiasm. Language has a rhythm, and "I was totally obsessed" has a completely different rhythm than "I was obsessed," and the former has a lilt that underscores the giddy quality.

It's valid to question whether the writer did that purposefully, but a good writer might do that purposefully, depending on the effect he or she wanted to create.

Making allowances for rhythm and effect in context is something new for me, and I'm not sure how vigorously I'm ready to advocate for it, but I am ready to argue for considering the question.

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